rofl
I used that same beginning sound in one of my songs i made a loooong time ago, but i remember it well. As far as the song goes, its pretty good for the vicious ambeint part, but use less well recognized sounds, like the robotoid generated voice, and drum loops. Plus, you might want to add some more distince melodies, at least for some part, because the sounds get a bit anoying if thats all that your listening to (because after a while, you relize that its not leading anywhere)