cool
obvious DNC crash, and kick, but its ok. It sounds pretty sweet, nice bass, but it was a bit hollow, the synths didnt really conclude to anything
cool
obvious DNC crash, and kick, but its ok. It sounds pretty sweet, nice bass, but it was a bit hollow, the synths didnt really conclude to anything
yeah i know....its still unfinished..anyway thanks 4 the help
Sounds really nice
The only thing I would recomend (i have problems with this too) is to make it sound more alive, if you know what I mean, but it sounds pretty good, just level off the piano volume as the song progresses, because its a little too loud for the reest of the song.
i wish i knew how to do that.....-_- but i dont...anyway the piano part i forgot to create an automation...anyway thanks 4 the help man...peace
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Yes, i agree, what you have here is DnB lol, nice though, but the phasing of the strings is a bit too much, just turn the % to 30-60% ish? cuz its a little anoying. But otherwise its pretty good.
Woah cool
Sounds really cool, sounds alot by that song by airbase or w/e "G" or something, i forget the title, but i didnt like te phase at like 1:50 ish, it was a bit too much, so it hurt the ears, but i reall liked the melody, twas nice, and since ur part of the 5 team too... im gonna have to ask you to review Beat is Coming, and Sunken Angel =P
wow cool
number one? im jealous... haha the chats are frozen but w.e voted five, nice job, but i thought that the phasing was a bit to much, and there was quite a bit of distortion. I thought that the ambient part was nice. Nice job here
I can only hope it lasts. Thanks for the review and vote.
its ok
i think you are doin pretty well, but u have alot of distortion, so lower the volume of the loud instruments. You could add a compressor to the main channel to limit maxing out thevolume and getting clipping with the waves. Plus the ending was a little abrupt, but sounds good, if you have time check out my stuff at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/142513
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I think this is really good, and you have potential, just jack up the speed, and eq it a bit more, the synths are a bit too loud compared to what little drums u have (add way more) and then add lots of crashes and such, you could also add a steady kick and some bass, or industrialize it, and make it uber creepy with reverb snares, even though its a speech synthisizer, i thought the beginnign was pretty well done, just add more drums, and fading, if you have time check out my stuff at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/142513
Nice
Nice Song, i liked the ambience alot, but as a listener, i didnt get anything different in the end, so the beginning and the end are the same, so try to end on a different note if u get what im saying, and make it more explosive, so add crashes and revs and such.
if u have time check out my stuff and tell me how im doing http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/142513
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I think the melody in the end is really nice, but i dont like the whole idea of progression with just drums. The push pull of the dead bass, with the drums. And you should, instead of cutting it off, make the melodoy continue when the person says dream machine for the first time. Sounds ALOT like DJ Scott Project, im sure thats what ur aiming for right? =P
yea you guessed...but its not finished... ill try to make it sound 100% better...thanks
Doesnt flow
I like the drums, and when i hear it in the beginnng, i expect some dark techno song, so make it go, the drums were really good, but the melody was a little ehhh =\, and the synths could have been MUCH better. So good luck with that.
Sorry for not following your expectations, but imo newgrounds doesn't need any more dark techno songs :P
Thanks for the review!
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