Cool
I think the melody in the end is really nice, but i dont like the whole idea of progression with just drums. The push pull of the dead bass, with the drums. And you should, instead of cutting it off, make the melodoy continue when the person says dream machine for the first time. Sounds ALOT like DJ Scott Project, im sure thats what ur aiming for right? =P
yea you guessed...but its not finished... ill try to make it sound 100% better...thanks
Doesnt flow
I like the drums, and when i hear it in the beginnng, i expect some dark techno song, so make it go, the drums were really good, but the melody was a little ehhh =\, and the synths could have been MUCH better. So good luck with that.
Sorry for not following your expectations, but imo newgrounds doesn't need any more dark techno songs :P
Thanks for the review!
French!
hey! i only started listening to it because it was french =P nice job, (though i dont usually listen to rap) but the french was cool, i could under stand a little bit =D
Glad not everyone is close-minded!
Cool
I like the phaseing you have, and the drums are pretty cool, though a bit too loud, its really good, it has a lot of arps and really good melodies, though there are no bases O.O add bass, and that'l take care of the problem, what highhat are u using, cuz i want it... looking for a good noise hat, like in satelite. This is good, though some of ur others are better, a little too creepy for my taste =\ :D but it actually sounds like something they could have in dawn of war or something like that, (mayybe certain parts)
The bass is there its just really hard to hear. It's not my favorite I've made (rather on the low side of like). Thanks for the review.
lemme guess
you use the voyager arp, and countdown? and PWM of sytrus? and the preset DNC kick and claps? Make it less obvious that your using FL =| but it sounds like you are offf to a good start.
For the DNC kick, i used the parametric eq 2 to up the bass and up the high end noise a lil bit, and no, it was the Hypersaw of sytrus. And it wasnt voyager, it was chip 3.
I also used the rave lead from 3xosc, as well as plucky repeat.
I guess you win :'(
lol, yup, urs is really good, dont know what else to say except... i officially hate you... :D
:( I still love you though T.T.
Emotional
The song was pretty good, the only thing, was that the melody clashed a little in certain areas, so u might wanna check that, like around the saw part around 1 ish? idk dont listen to me =P
Yeah there were things I wasn't too happy with but I kind of rushed it a little even though a spent a good amount of time on it.
rofl
I used that same beginning sound in one of my songs i made a loooong time ago, but i remember it well. As far as the song goes, its pretty good for the vicious ambeint part, but use less well recognized sounds, like the robotoid generated voice, and drum loops. Plus, you might want to add some more distince melodies, at least for some part, because the sounds get a bit anoying if thats all that your listening to (because after a while, you relize that its not leading anywhere)
this was like my first song. you should check out this one goes out to sven and tell me what you think
cool
I really liked the beginning, sounded very water. its cool. Wish I could make hardcore like you so i could get up the ranks =P
haha XD Thanks for the review
Its interesting
The beginning was too slow for my taste (just need a more ambient feel). I personally dont like the Synth too much, (layer it, and vary it), and the clap is a bit anoying (its on each beat), and the typical saw Arpegio is really anoying cuz it just sounds pulsing, but not in a good way. (The audience applause is anoying, no matter how good the artist)
hehe thx for the review :o
And thx for ur criticism
and normally its a lead lol i just changed it up a bit ^^
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